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Improvement Suggestions of Online News Delivery
Yuqing Zheng Mar 15, 2019 The title of this story is Joss Stone performs in North Korea on a world tour from BBC news. The links: This link does not open a new web page. […]
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Improving strategy for a BBC news story
College admissions scandal: The extreme lengths parents go to https://www.bbc.com/news/world-us-canada-47532170# This is the first article released on BBC world news about the US college admission scandal which is exposed recently. It’s an integrated article created […]
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‘BASIC principle’: the key content strategy online writers should not abandon
In terms of the ‘BASIC principles’ for web writing, the story written by Rex Santus about Elizabeth Warren’s presidential candidate announcement of the plan could be better if it develops more on its interactivity, adaptability, […]
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Improvement suggestion about news “Administrators appointed to wave power firm Carnegie”
I analysed a story about the wave power firm Carnegie published by The Australian. Comparing with the same news story published by ABC, it needs to be improved regard to headline, image and… Lack of […]
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Improvement of the news story
The news I read is an opinion called ‘Meritocracy is a myth invented by the rich’ from The Guardian, written by Nathan Robinson. Link: https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2019/mar/14/meritocracy-myth-rich-college-admissions Hyperlink: The original article already has some accurate links with […]
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Improvement Suggestions of Online News Delivery
I analyzed an article on BuzzFeed which is about air cabin crew being arrested because of bringing $21 million-worth drugs into Australia. There is only one hyperlink in this article, which linked to an ABC News article that […]
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Improvement of Crikey’s story: School Strike for Climate founder nominated for Nobel Peace Prize
Greta Thunberg has been nominated for the Nobel Peace Prize.
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Blog post for improving The guardian news ‘global climate strike’.
News Link: https://www.theguardian.com/education/2019/mar/14/youth-climate-strikes-to-take-place-in-almost-100-countries-greta-thunberg The Guardian’s news about ‘Youth strike’ have several parts need to be improved. Key problems: Multimedia & News length Hypertext Key points & Bulleted list Interactive Method Firstly，it do […]
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Critique of Gemma Bath’s online delivery of George Pell’s sentencing in Mammamia
I will be analysing the online article ‘”Breathtakingly arrogant.” George Pell’s sentencing delivered live worldwide” appearing in the digital-born publication Mammamia, posted on March 13th. https://www.mamamia.com.au/george-pell-sentencing/ There are two pictures placed above the story. A […]
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Improvement suggestion about news “School building collapse in Nigeria kills at least 9, scores trapped”
The news I chose is about Nigerian school collapses which published at China Daily on 14 March 2019. It is a brief news and have very clear point. However, compare with the same news story […]