https://www.huffpost.com/entry/australia-social-media_n_67488528e4b069b2c3ca71db#comments
The Huff post article focuses on the emergence of social media bans for children in Australia, but there is still room for improvement, because the entire news is only presented through text description.
Subheading ：
The lack of a subheading in the article will prevent readers from quickly grasping the main content of the news. It is recommended to add a concise and clear subheading. For example, The cost of online dangers to young people.
Hyperlinks：
The article lacks hyperlinks to the background, which prevents readers from gaining insight into why this law was proposed. Adding links to relevant reports or studies, For example, articles on Nighttime mobile phone use and the impact of past cyberbullying on Australian children to help readers explore the topic further.
Useful information images：
The article lacks useful images. It is recommended to show a data chart on social media usage among teenagers under 18 at the beginning of the article to allow readers to further understand the trend.
Navigate：
The navigation bar lacks a search bar, making it difficult to further explore keywords and find corresponding news. It is recommended to add a search function in the navigation bar.
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