Dame Dorothy Tangney and Dame Enid Lyons immortalised in first female statues in Canberra’s parliamentary zone

ABC News:  Dame Dorothy Tangney and Dame Enid Lyons immortalised in first female statues in Canberra’s parliamentary zone

by  Georgia Roberts (8/ March 2023)

Link：https://www.abc.net.au/news/2023-03-08/canberra-parliamentary-zone-to-get-first-female-statues/102064348

 

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The journalist appropriate quotes from the sculptor’s interviews and statements to enhance the credibility of the report. His attitude in a neutral and objective manner.

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