The New Daily: https://www.thenewdaily.com.au/news/state/nsw/2025/03/20/lilie-james-inquest-psychologist
In terms of readability, the article is long and dense with information and lacks a clear structure, which may make it difficult for readers to quickly understand the background of the case. The article could be divided into different parts by using subheadings.
In terms of professionalism, the news mentioned a psychologist’s warning about the risks of domestic violence, but did not provide any relevant resources for mental health or domestic violence help. Some interviews with experts could have been added, and audio or video recordings of the interviews could have been played to add authority and credibility.
In terms of media, the main focus is on textual narration, with a lack of images, videos or interactive charts, presenting information in a single way and failing to give a clear idea of the seriousness of the news. Therefore, pictures related to the case, such as the evidence map released by the police and the diagram of the crime scene, can be added to help readers understand the development of the case more intuitively.
Picture source: The court released a frame of CCTV footage of Paul Thijssen moments before he killed Lilie James in the school bathroom. (Supplied: Coroners Court of New South Wales)
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