Improving “King and Kate return to annual Commonwealth service”

Original text: King and Kate return to annual Commonwealth service

This is a news article about the King and Kate’s participation in the March 11, 2025 annual Commonwealth Day service by BBC News. And it reads better on a cell phone than on a computer (because of the ads), but overall, none of it detracts from the quality of the reading.

The following are some recommendations：

• First of all, for the picture, since the title says King, but in the picture in the article the King is standing on the far side, the visual center does not match the title.

• Video clips could be added, especially live footage or interview clips about the King and Kate attending the annual Commonwealth ceremony.

• Because of the historical context of this event, it is recommended that you can link to background stories about the history of the Commonwealth, the roles of the King and Kate, and the relevant annual commonwealth service, either at the beginning or in the middle of the article. Just add a link to Annual Commonwealth Service.

• It can also link to social media or trending topics about the event at the end of the article to increase engagement, such as a link to the royal family‘s Twitter.